Midnight at The Oasis - Video Feedback. (Toms Visit)

Video feedback

Scene 1, Shot 1, Take 1;
This was a establishing shot. The car was too slow.
Take 3;
Overall a good take.
Take 4;
Overall a good take.

Scene 1, Shot 2;
This was a medium shot. The camera was too close up and therefore chopped off Lola’s head so the audience could not see.
Take 2;
Overall a good take. More of a long shot then a medium shot. (meduim shot is what we aimed at having.)

Scene 1, Shot 3, Take 1;
This was a long shot. In this take Lola walked too slow.
Take 2;
This was a long shot. The long shot was filmed form a different angle and Lola walked at right pace however Lola’s coat opened which was not meant to happen.
Take 3;
This was a long shot. Lola's walking was at a good pace.

Scene 1, Shot 4, Take 1;
This was a close up·shot. The panning was to slow.
Take 2;
This was a close up shot and was the correct panning and·correct walking pace.

Scene 1, Shot 5, Take 1;
This was a long shot. The shot had bad lighting.
Take 2;
This was a long shot. Lola walked straight at the camera.
Take 3;
This was a long shot and once again walked straight at the camera.

* We missed out Scene 1, Shot 5 as we had combined them into one in Scence 1, Shot 4.*

Scene 1, Shot 6, Take 1;
This was a long shot. This part of filming looks unorganised.
Take 2;
This was a long shot. The actors stopped in the corridor and the camera could see them.
Take 4;
This was a long shot and once again the actors stopped where the camera still had them in sight.
Take 5;
This was a long shot and once again the actors stopped where the camera could still see them.
Take 6;
This was a long shot and was a overall good shot and a good follow through.

Scene 1, Shot 7, Take 1;
This was a long shot and was overall a good shot.
Take 2;
This was a long shot and was shot from a different angle than take 1. The mis-en-scene was poor and the camera's panning was bad.
Take 3;
This was a long shot. This was poor mis-en-scene.
Take 4;
This was a long shot and was overall good.
Take 5;
This was a long shot and was filmed from a different angle. It was a well lit shot and was generally good however the actor stopped half way up the stairs where the camera still had them in sight.
Take 6;
This was a high angle shot and could have been lit better however was generally well filmed.

Scene 3, Shot 9, Take 1;
This was a long shot. The lighting was bad and the actor looks at the camera and smiles which looks unproffessional.
Take 2;
This was a long shot and is well lit however the shot was too long.